After you've come up with what you feel is a workable premise for a story, the very
next action you will want to take is often the basic outline. This is a
skeletal structure for the working body of the film, and is simpler than a step
outline, which contains every scene in the film.
How should you begin?
The barest outline should really contain every major step in the
story, which means that you will leave out most of the subplot elements. I subscribe to
the idea of a four-part three act structure, as I find it a useful tool with which to
build a story. One you've laid out the script with this basic structure in order to
solidify its strong dramatic direction, then you can "personalize" it and make
it a less of a traditional Hollywood style if you wish.
The four parts of a three act structure each have three subacts. Thus, if you were to
lay out the structural skeleton, the minimum number of bones would look like the layout
below, in which I have also labeled them with their corresponding structural elements as
explained in the chapters on three-act structure.
- ACT I
Subact 1 - includes Initiating Event
Subact 2 - ends with Call to Action (the "Page
17" event)
Subact 3 - often begins with a refusal of the call,
and ends with Commitment to Act
- ACT II
Subact 1
Subact 2
Subact 3
- Act II Midpoint - point of no return
Subact 1
Subact 2
Subact 3 - The Moment of Truth
- ACT III
Subact 1 - A New Tactic
Subact 2 - The Demon is Confronted
Subact 3 - ends with climax
- Coda
For your elucidation, I will show you how this structural skeleton works for the film
"Thelma & Louise."
- ACT I
Subact 1 - includes Initiating Event
Thelma and Louise decide to take a trip together, although Thelma has not yet informed her
bossy husband, Darryl.
Subact 2 - ends with Call to Action (the
"Page 17" event)
In the parking lot of a country and western bar, Louise shoots Harlan, Thelma's would-be
rapist.
Subact 3 - often begins with a refusal of
the call, and ends with Commitment to Act
Thelma suggests they go to the Police. Louise refuses, and says that no one will
believe their version of the story. The two decide to flee.
- ACT II
Subact 1
A cop, Slocum, begins to investigate the murder. Louise decides that
she is going to Mexico, but Thelma hasn't yet agreed to join her. Louise asks her
boyfriend, Jimmy, to wire her the money. Thelma argues with Darryl over the phone, but
doesn't tell him what happened.
Subact 2
Thelma meets J.D., but Louise won't give him a ride. Thelma decides to go to
Mexico with Thelma. They meet up with J.D. again, and Thelma begs Louise to take him
along. The FBI is now involved in the hunt.
Subact 3
Jimmy shows up at the Western Union money drop with the $6700 Louise requested.
J.D. seduces Thelma, during which he tells her about his criminal past robbing gas
stations; they make love. They discover that J.D. has stolen the money.
- Act II Midpoint - point of no return
Subact 1
The FBI sets up at Darryl's house. A lascivious truck driver makes
obscene gestures at T & L. Thelma, inspired by J.D.'s methods, robs a store.
Subact 2
Slocum talks to Jimmy and interrogates J.D. Louise talks to Slocum on
the phone, and he tries to assure her that he's on their side. The lascivious truck driver
returns. Thelma realizes that Louise was raped in Texas.
Subact 3 - The Moment of Truth
A state trooper pulls the two over, and they lock him in his trunk at
gunpoint. Louise talks to Slocum, and he begs her to turn herself in, says they're now
charged with murder, and that he knows what happened to Louise in Texas. The FBI
successfully traces the call.
- ACT III
Subact 1 - A New Tactic
Thelma tells Louise that everything's changed and she can't ever go back. The
pair lure the lascivious truck driver onto a side road, and blow his rig up with gunfire.
Subact 2 - The Demon is Confronted
The cops begin pursuit. T & L temporally lose them. They arrive at the Grand
Canyon, and accidentally almost drive off of the edge. Slocum arrives by helicopter, and
dozens of police cars appear.
Subact 3 - ends with climax
Thelma and Louise refuse to surrender, and drive off of the edge of the Grand
Canyon.
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